Not crazy about it. Blown out highlight on the bottom kind of smacks up against the silhouette of the tent. The most interesting part of the form is the tent squiggle. I would use a fill light on that and subdue the cloud intensity.
I enjoyed seeing 2 of your pieces at the Fair's Photography Show. Did one of them have a ribbon on it? I also saw the work of numerous Fallbrook photographers, but didn't recognize their names. (There are shooters in the Village other than the Shutters? What's this world coming to?!).
Not crazy about it. Blown out highlight on the bottom kind of smacks up against the silhouette of the tent. The most interesting part of the form is the tent squiggle. I would use a fill light on that and subdue the cloud intensity.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed seeing 2 of your pieces at the Fair's Photography Show. Did one of them have a ribbon on it?
ReplyDeleteI also saw the work of numerous Fallbrook photographers, but didn't recognize their names. (There are shooters in the Village other than the Shutters? What's this world coming to?!).
Thanks, guys... I put this up to get constructive comments.
ReplyDeleteMC... I did get a Special Award for the one I call "Pouring Bronze". Thanks for noticing!!
Mike